hairography

he runs around and does sports and allows me to be cooked alive. so to get him back i hang down in his eyes and blind him when he most needs to see. But he knows exactly how to get me back.... he takes me to a scary building and has me cut down real short, and even when i'm short he always is brushing me and combing me even though i always get messed up again anyway. which i do on purpose to bug him :p. something that really bugs me is he usually doesn't just like me to just lay flat...he puts me in weird hair styles that he thinks are cool. but the worst part is when we get to school I've constantly got people touching me cause they think i'm soft (weird right?). but i like that after we leave school he goes and plays sports and whatnot so i'm free to go crazy!!!

Voice- Shows that he is an active person and always has to be changing his hair styles. Word Choice- Good word choice just put in a couple better words when needed. Figurative language- You need figurative language there is none in this piece. Inference- I can learn that he is an active kid and likes to be social with many people.